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They Fell Down
They fell down
Crashed on our life,
The plane slit
just like a knife.
Trembling people
Who lost all hope,
Frozen with fear
Unable to cope.
The cloud rose up,
Up in the air
Ashes floated
And tangled in hair.
Skies darkened until
unable to look,
Fifty-six minutes
Was all that it took.
Frozen with fear
Unable to cope,
Trembling people
Who lost all hope.
Prayers flew up
Just like the smoke,
While the rest of the country
Still awoke.
The thing that happened
That changed the town,
Crashing down on our life
They fell down.
Dedicated to all who died that day.
They fell down
Crashed on our life,
The plane slit
just like a knife.
Trembling people
Who lost all hope,
Frozen with fear
Unable to cope.
The cloud rose up,
Up in the air
Ashes floated
And tangled in hair.
Skies darkened until
unable to look,
Fifty-six minutes
Was all that it took.
Frozen with fear
Unable to cope,
Trembling people
Who lost all hope.
Prayers flew up
Just like the smoke,
While the rest of the country
Still awoke.
The thing that happened
That changed the town,
Crashing down on our life
They fell down.
Dedicated to all who died that day.
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I wrote this I think last year and I still consider it my best piece of poetry I have ever written. (Just consider Poetry is NOT my forte)
I was just thinking about 9/11/01 and remembered this poem a wrote and thought I should revise it and post it up on dA.
So yup... here it is... not much more to say....
Please dont coppy this as your own... I worked REALLY HARD on it.
If you coppy this...
I was just thinking about 9/11/01 and remembered this poem a wrote and thought I should revise it and post it up on dA.
So yup... here it is... not much more to say....
Please dont coppy this as your own... I worked REALLY HARD on it.
If you coppy this...
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this is good